diff --git a/vacation.p8 b/vacation.p8
index 2704894..826a1c7 100644
--- a/vacation.p8
+++ b/vacation.p8
@@ -582,7 +582,7 @@ brth_bg={1,2,3,2,1}
 breather = {
  colors = brth_fg,
  sep = 8,
- speed=240,
+ speed=300,
  f=0,
 }
 mknew(breather)
@@ -708,6 +708,11 @@ function zonk_mode:set(_, field,value)
  pukeboard{field=field, value=value}
  self[field]=value
 end
+function zonk_mode:unset(_, ...)
+ for n in all(pack(...)) do
+  self[n] = nil
+ end
+end
 function zonk_mode:at(_, x, y)
  self.txt_frame=scootbox.new{
   x=x,
@@ -935,7 +940,6 @@ wide awake!
 
 function normal_awakener()
  return zonk_mode.new{
-  br_spd=300,
   br_cols=brth_bg,
   file=[[center:2:15 bon
 yOU'VE LEARNED
@@ -1811,6 +1815,11 @@ function create_game()
   {
    f=zonk_mode.new,
    params={{
+    txd=0,
+    txf=1,
+    exf=30,
+    cmul=0.25,
+    hide_stripes=true,
     file=[[center:6:20
 wELCOME TO vACATION!
 
@@ -1866,11 +1875,6 @@ THEY'RE JUST HERE TO
 center:2:10
   UP: JUMP
 DOWN: DIVE]],
-    txd=0,
-    txf=1,
-    exf=30,
-    cmul=0.25,
-    hide_stripes=true,
    }},
   },
   {
@@ -1883,20 +1887,75 @@ DOWN: DIVE]],
   {
    f = zonk_mode.new,
    params={{
-    file=[[center:2:19
-incomplete content:
-iNDUCTION PROTOTYPE
+    br_spd = 240,
+    file=[[center:3:18
+hEY, WELCOME BACK!
+ >sTARTING TO GET
+ >THE HANG OF IT?
+-----
+center:3:14
+nOW, THIS GAME
+PROMISED TO BE
+  >#HYPNOTIC.
+-----
+center:6:18
+ aND YOU MIGHT BE
+ !ZONING !OUT TO IT
+ALREADY! bUT THESE
+>TEXT SEGMENTS ARE
+MORE TRADITIONALLY
+    >!HYPNOTIC.
+-----
+center:8:20
+ nOW, YOU MIGHT NOT
+THINK !HYPNOSIS !WORKS
+ ON YOU. tHAT'S ALL
+>RIGHT! yOU CAN JUST
+ #ZONE #OUT AND ENJOY
+>THE GAME. yOU DON'T
+ HAVE TO !FOLLOW THE
+ TEXT TOO CLOSELY.
+-----
+center:9:20
+tHIS IS A #vACATION!
+yOU DON'T HAVE TO DO
+ >MUCH OF #ANYTHING.
+ >yOU DON'T HAVE TO
+ TENSE UP AND !RELAX
+ SOMEHOW. yOU DON'T
+ >HAVE TO !IMAGINE A 
+>STAIRCASE AND COUNT
+     BACKWARDS.
+-----
+center:4:20
+tHAT ALL SOUNDS LIKE
+ TOO MUCH WORK. aLL
+YOU NEED TO DO RIGHT
+ NOW IS TO #BREATHE.
 -----
 center:1:13 bon bpal:1 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:1 set:txf:2 set:txd:0 set:exd:0 set:exf:10
 bREATHE IN...
 -----
+center:1:14 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:2 bpal:2 bspd:270
+bREATHE OUT...
+-----
+center:1:13 bon bpal:1 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:1 bspd:300
+bREATHE IN...
+-----
 center:1:14 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:2 bpal:2
 bREATHE OUT...
 -----
-set:bwt:0 set:txd:16 set:txf:20 set:exf:60 center:3:19
- >gREAT! iT'S LIKE
- YOU'VE BEEN DOING
-THIS ALL YOUR LIFE.]],
+set:bwt:0 unset:txd:txf:exf:exd center:4:19
+  gREAT! iT FEELS
+>NICE TO !SINK INTO
+   RELAXATION SO
+EASILY, DOESN'T IT?
+-----
+>iT HELPS YOUR MIND
+ FLOAT AND !DRIFT,
+LIKE A #POOLTOY #ORCA
+  ON THE WAVES...
+]],
    }},
   },
   {