transition into the stage less abruptly

vacation.p8

@@ -1799,6 +1799,12 @@ DRIFT,SOAR,IMAGINE,BE
 RELAX,CHILL,TOY,POOLTOY
 SINK,DEEP,TRANCE,FOLLOW]]
 
+basic_breathe=[[center:1:13 bon set:confirmed:true set:bwt:1
+bREATHE IN...
+-----
+center:1:14 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:2
+bREATHE OUT...]]
+
 function sequencer:next()
  if (mainview.score) self.score += mainview.score
  if (mainview.max_score) self.max_score += mainview.max_score
@@ -1828,12 +1834,12 @@ function create_game()
     cmul=0.25,
     hide_stripes=true,
     file=[[center:6:20
-wELCOME TO vACATION!
+wELCOME TO !vACATION!
 
 tHIS GAME USES #ONLY
 #THE #ARROW #KEYS FOR
 GAMEPLAY, SO PRESS
-RIGHT TO CONTINUE.
+!RIGHT TO CONTINUE.
 -----
 center:9:20
    >vACATION IS A
@@ -1863,7 +1869,7 @@ iN THIS GAME, YOU'RE
   AN #ORCA #POOLTOY.
 -----
 center:3:16
-tHAT'S ALSO THE
+>tHAT'S ALSO THE
 CHARACTER IN THE
   ARCADE PART.
 -----
@@ -1881,7 +1887,7 @@ THEY'RE JUST HERE TO
 -----
 center:2:10
   UP: JUMP
-DOWN: DIVE]],
+DOWN: !DIVE]],
    }},
   },
   {
@@ -1898,7 +1904,7 @@ DOWN: DIVE]],
     txf=15,
     exf=30,
     br_spd = 240,
-    file=[[center:3:18
+    files={[[center:3:18
 hEY, WELCOME BACK!
  >sTARTING TO GET
  >THE HANG OF IT?
@@ -1941,7 +1947,7 @@ center:4:20
 tHAT ALL SOUNDS LIKE
  TOO MUCH WORK. aLL
 YOU NEED TO DO RIGHT
- NOW IS TO #BREATHE.
+ !NOW IS TO #BREATHE.
 -----
 center:1:13 bon bpal:1 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:1 set:txf:2 set:txd:0 set:exd:0 set:exf:10
 bREATHE IN...
@@ -1949,19 +1955,13 @@ bREATHE IN...
 center:1:14 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:2 bspd:270
 bREATHE OUT...
 -----
-center:1:13 bon bpal:1 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:1
+center:1:13 bpal:1 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:1
 bREATHE IN...
 -----
 center:1:14 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:2 bspd:300
-bREATHE OUT...
------
-center:1:13 bon bpal:1 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:1
-bREATHE IN...
------
-center:1:14 set:confirmed:true set:bwt:2 bpal:2
-bREATHE OUT...
------
-set:bwt:0 unset:txd:txf:exf:exd center:4:19
+bREATHE OUT...]],
+basic_breathe,
+[[set:bwt:0 bpal:2 unset:txd:txf:exf:exd center:4:19
   gREAT! iT FEELS
 >NICE TO !SINK INTO
    RELAXATION SO
@@ -1972,7 +1972,49 @@ center:4:19
  FLOAT AND !DRIFT,
 LIKE A #POOLTOY #ORCA
   ON THE WAVES...
-]],
+-----
+center:3:18
+iT'S A FUN IDEA TO
+JUST BE A TOY LIKE
+ >THAT, ISN'T IT?
+-----
+center:7:20
+iMAGINE IT! !fLOATING
+>FREE ON A WARM DAY,
+COOL WATER SPLASHING
+>AT YOUR !VINYL FINS,
+YOUR AIR-FILLED BODY
+ >BOBBING BUOYANTLY
+   ON THE SURF...
+-----
+center:8:20
+ nOW, !YOUR !MIND CAN
+ >DO WHATEVER FEELS
+>RIGHT -- IT !FOLLOWS
+  ONLY !SUGGESTIONS
+  THAT ARE FUN FOR
+YOU, IDEAS !YOU WOULD
+ >ENJOY AND !WANT TO
+    >EXPERIENCE.
+-----
+center:4:19
+ aNYTHING ELSE CAN
+>JUST ROLL OFF YOUR
+MIND LIKE WATER OFF
+ A POOLTOY'S BACK.
+-----
+center:5:19 set:bwt:2 bpal:1
+bUT WON'T IT BE FUN
+  TO #FEEL #THE #SEA
+>#BENEATH #YOU AS YOU
+SURF OVER THE WAVES
+    NEXT ROUND?]],
+   basic_breathe,
+  [[set:bwt:0 bpal:2 center:4:14
+AND ZONE OUT,
+ >CHILL OUT,
+>AND FLOAT ON
+ >THROUGH...]]},
    }},
   },
   {